I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1. My teachers are Mr Ogilvie and Mr Wong.
Monday, 7 December 2015
Room 7's favourite flag
silver The Original is 15 in room 7 pick 15 and the silver tem - red white and blue flag had 8 and the higt was the origanal flag win in room 7 because they
Friday, 4 December 2015
Thursday, 3 December 2015
Revising Writing by Sharon Taylor
Instructions
Read over this piece of writing. Change it so that it makes sense and so it sounds exciting. You can delete sentences and change words in the writing so that it can be enhanced. Try not to take the meaning away from the writing.
On Saturday I was at my Papa's, and Aunts, and Uncles, house getting ready for halloween. When I saw my papa was dressed up in a spooky zombie I was dressed up as a purple bat. I was ready for halloween. Me and my Papa were going around the houses asking for lollies .
Once I went to a house that was very black and very spooky my Papa got scared I told him don’t worry It's just a house full of dickarayshions . There Were spiderwebs and bats and witch dickarayshions I knocked on the door and out came a ghost a man and a lady gave us sweets yummy happy trical treat I said to them next I went down to another house that wasn't spooky as it was
It only had spiders and black a black witch’s broom I knocked on the door and out came a black witch the lady gave us chocolate and chocolate candy pumpkins .
When we stopped at kings road we saw my friend Zara and her Dad Babu they were going trical treating for yummy treats me and my Papa were walking to Zara we asked could we come with you to get yummy treats they said yes When we stopped down at the cafe we had a hot chocolate and a strawberry cupcake Than we went back down to costs cress to go to other houses for trick or treating
When we saw another house that was even scarier I said happy trinkil treat and out came a spider the man gave us lollies and chocolate it was fun at halloween. than it was time to go home I said bye to my friend Zara and went home to eat all the goodies .
My Edited Piece of Writing
On Saturday I was at my Papa's, Aunt’s, and Uncle’s house getting ready for Halloween. When I saw my Papa he was dressed up in a spooky Zombie he looked so scary. I was dressed up as a purple bat. I was ready for Halloween. Me and my Papa were going around the houses asking for lollies.
Once we went to a different house it was very black and very spooky. My Papa got scared so I told him don’t worry It's just a house full of decorations. There were spiderwebs, bats, and witch decorations. I knocked on the door and out came a ghost man. The man gave us sweets “trick or treat” I said to them.
Next I went down the road to another house that wasn't as spooky as the last. It only had black spiders and a witch’s broom. I knocked on the door and out came a black witch. She gave us some Chocolates and Candies.
When we stopped at Kings Road we saw my friend Zara and her Dad Babu. They were going trick or treating for treats. Me and my Papa were walking with Zara as we asked if we could come with them to get treats they said “yes”.
We stopped at the cafe and we had a hot chocolate and a Strawberry Cupcakes. Then we went back down to Coates Crescent to go to the other houses for trick or treating.
We saw another house that was scary. I said “trick or treat” and out came a spider. The man gave us some lollies and Chocolates . It was fun in halloween. “Finally time to go home” I said to myself. I said bye to my friend Zara and we both went home to eat all of our goodies.
Yesterday and today I have been working with Taylor we had read over a sample of writing Taylor and me had to fix up the writing
Wednesday, 2 December 2015
Thursday, 26 November 2015
Wednesday, 25 November 2015
Tuesday, 24 November 2015
Monday, 23 November 2015
Monday, 16 November 2015
Friday, 13 November 2015
My Chopsticks challenge recount
My Recount on chop stick challenge
Today we were doing chopsticks challenge so we had to pick up the wine gums with the chopsticks so Mrs Paton said start. So my group always be last . Nyjah pick the wine gums from the bowl to get the wine gum to the next bowl . shailah is going to the next bowl and then she went to go to the other person . My groups name is Nyjah Shailah and Juliet and Hajera . Joseph was picking the wine gums to the next bowl . Then Mrs Paton was measuring the ones that drop onto the table. So she tell’s as who drop the wine gums on the table measuring it then they say the numbers and then writing it down. Then we had to use google drawing to make a post then we had to put it up on or blog and then we had to do I challenge half of the class and then the 1st group win the challenge . The End
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Thursday, 12 November 2015
my comet
Tuesday, 10 November 2015
Chop stick challeng
the gragph shows the number of centimetren from where the starting bowl was the ta'ain
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writing
Monday, 9 November 2015
Friday, 6 November 2015
Thursday, 5 November 2015
Wednesday, 4 November 2015
Monday, 2 November 2015
Friday, 30 October 2015
Wednesday, 28 October 2015
Friday, 23 October 2015
Wednesday, 21 October 2015
Tuesday, 20 October 2015
Monday, 19 October 2015
Sharon recount
‘’Splash’’ into the water the water at in the pools was go on top of me .
The water was warm and nice . I had to play so I went under the water I did a cannonball in the water and I was have fun in the pools because it was time to go class so I was having fun in the water it is cool and we went to the shop to eat food at home so my papa and nana and yvonne ante and it was dace time to go to my home .
this is my recount
this is my recount
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Friday, 16 October 2015
recount writing structure
Today I have been learning about a recount.A recount is is retelling a story that what your saying.
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writing
Wednesday, 14 October 2015
Tuesday, 13 October 2015
Sharon painting art work
Art Still Life Reflection
- What are you most
pleased with? Why / why not?
The apple because it’s big and I like the colour red.
2. What did you learn from creating your still life painting?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I learnt to blend the colours together for my background.
3. What did you find easy ?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I found drawing my orange easy.
4. What did you find difficult?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I found blending the colours together difficult.
5. Who did helped you with your still life painting?
Miss Paton helped me with my painting.
6. What would you change? why / why not?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
My banana because it was not big like the apple.
7. What would you do to improve your still life painting next time?
I would draw my banana bigger.
Monday, 12 October 2015
Thursday, 17 September 2015
Wednesday, 16 September 2015
Wednesday, 26 August 2015
Thursday, 20 August 2015
Monday, 17 August 2015
Friday, 7 August 2015
Wednesday, 5 August 2015
Friday, 31 July 2015
Wednesday, 29 July 2015
Friday, 24 July 2015
Wednesday, 22 July 2015
Tuesday, 21 July 2015
Monday, 20 July 2015
Thursday, 2 July 2015
Wednesday, 1 July 2015
Tuesday, 30 June 2015
Monday, 29 June 2015
Friday, 26 June 2015
Making Anzac bicuits
Making Anzac biscuits by Sharon
When we were making Anzac biscuits I was excited.
The Anzac biscuits tasted like golden hot syrup in my mouth. Mele was cut 100 grams of butter, then it was Alex's turn to grease the trays.
Shailah was measured the syrup.Joshua had to measured the flour.
Tai and Nazanin melted the butter and the golden syrup
in the hall kitchen. Then they came back to Room 7. Miss Paton slowly carried the pot to Room 7. Liam measured the sugar.Avalon was measured the rolled oats and poured the in the big red bowl. Najib was measured the coconut. Joshua measured the flour into the bowl. Miss Paton measured the the baking soda. Aung Naing and Sanujan.Marieta was mixing the ingredients . Then Aiden , Hajera ,sky and Jacob had to rolled the dough into little balls and Juliet and Nyjah , Aiden flattened the mixture
with a fork. Liam and taylor was carrying the tray to the hall . Then Miss Paton was take the Anzac biscuits on the plate. Then I tasted the Anzac the And I like hot gold crumble .
Making Anzac biscuits by Sharon
When we were making Anzac biscuits I was excited.
The Anzac biscuits tasted like golden hot syrup in my mouth. Mele was cut 100 grams of butter, then it was Alex's turn to grease the trays.
Shailah was measured the syrup.Joshua had to measured the flour.
Tai and Nazanin melted the butter and the golden syrup
in the hall kitchen. Then they came back to Room 7. Miss Paton slowly carried the pot to Room 7. Liam measured the sugar.Avalon was measured the rolled oats and poured the in the big red bowl. Najib was measured the coconut. Joshua measured the flour into the bowl. Miss Paton measured the the baking soda. Aung Naing and Sanujan.Marieta was mixing the ingredients . Then Aiden , Hajera ,sky and Jacob had to rolled the dough into little balls and Juliet and Nyjah , Aiden flattened the mixture
with a fork. Liam and taylor was carrying the tray to the hall . Then Miss Paton was take the Anzac biscuits on the plate. Then I tasted the Anzac the And I like hot gold crumble .
Making Anzac biscuits by Sharon
When we were making Anzac biscuits I was excited.
The Anzac biscuits tasted like golden hot syrup in my mouth. Mele was cut 100 grams of butter, then it was Alex's turn to grease the trays.
Shailah was measured the syrup.Joshua had to measured the flour.
Tai and Nazanin melted the butter and the golden syrup
in the hall kitchen. Then they came back to Room 7. Miss Paton slowly carried the pot to Room 7. Liam measured the sugar.Avalon was measured the rolled oats and poured the in the big red bowl. Najib was measured the coconut. Joshua measured the flour into the bowl. Miss Paton measured the the baking soda. Aung Naing and Sanujan.Marieta was mixing the ingredients . Then Aiden , Hajera ,sky and Jacob had to rolled the dough into little balls and Juliet and Nyjah , Aiden flattened the mixture
with a fork. Liam and taylor was carrying the tray to the hall . Then Miss Paton was take the Anzac biscuits on the plate. Then I tasted the Anzac the And I like hot gold crumble . this is about making Anzac biscuits.
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