Secret ball game

Secret game

Then we listened to Mr Wong´s instructions.

Suspicious spies went in a circle .

Then Mr Wong chose   Charmaine .

To not past it to Joel.

Second round  Mr Wong picked  Joel .

When Joel started to pass the ball .

But Joel never past it to Sharon .

writing reports planing

today i was writing about god wits because it was in are Inquiry and it Mirgaret .

writing about me

Studyladder by Sharon

today i was learning how does a caterpillar become a  butterfly

 it was my topic

Compare and Contrast- Explanation vs Information

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Today we are learning about  Explanation vs Information

A basket ball had magical powers

A basketball had magical powers

Paragraphs 1

A basketball was flying in the sky. someone played with it then it flying .

A basketball was shot by the star ,and it was making the world cold in Christmas.

God make the ball fly up in the sky ,and when the basketball player won because at ball made that team won .    

Paragraphs 2

The basketball was do bad thing not moving .

Then the go player pick it up and it fly up

In the hop .

Then it was sitting in the house and when people went it fly in the sky and went to a little boy he was sad now happy .

This boy was walk with a basket ball and said look my ball is flying around and it went to a mall and there was lost ball and went and got the ball but the ball was in the next to that ball but he went with the ball .

 

Paragraphs 3

Basket ball was fly in the shop when the boy hold it .the boy had a basket boy and it was rolling fast in the house .

Basketball was in the shop and when the girl thrower it fly out of the shop and went to a next shop . i saw a basket ball running

The basket ball run and the boy said wow and went home and then the dad saw and run out of then car and went back home .

Paragraphs 4

I saw i ball flying in the shop . I follow it and it went to the movies .

The basketball was running down the road and it went to a baby and the baby was cut it and it beak  the ball.

Basket ball fall of the basket and the player went to put it back and it was flying and it went to the shop. were all, balls was and he said on no the ball is gone now i have to buy

It was hard for me but i can do it now . by Sharon 

My Poetry

Today we were learning about poetry. I think everything was a bit hard for me at first. But then, I began to know how to do everything. (I m happy about that.)

How to brush your teeth? By Sharon

1. First  you get your teeth brush
2. You wet it a little bit
3. Then you put the  toothpaste on top of the  toothbrush
4. You brush your bottom teeth
5. Then you top teeth
6. Spit out the toothpaste
7. Put water in your mouth
8. Spit the water out of your mouth
9. Then brush your bottom teeth and top together

Today we are learning about things like how to make a cake.

Acrostic poem

today we are learning acrostic poem

My Favorite keyboard Shortcut

 We are learn  about your own Favorite keyboard shortcut  my one as you see is Ctrl + t .

The ugly animals

 Today i had to writing about  a ugly animals .

Kyle Mew burn

Revising Writing by Sharon Taylor

Instructions Read over this piece of writing. Change it so that it makes sense and so it sounds exciting. You can delete sentences and change words in the writing so that it can be enhanced. Try not to take the meaning away from the writing. On Saturday I was at my Papa's, and Aunts, and Uncles, house getting ready for halloween. When I saw my papa was dressed up in a spooky zombie I was dressed up as a purple bat. I was ready for halloween. Me and my Papa were going around the houses asking for lollies . Once I went to a house that was very black and very spooky my Papa got scared I told him don’t worry It's just a house full of dickarayshions . There Were spiderwebs and bats and witch dickarayshions I knocked on the door and out came a ghost a man and a lady gave us sweets yummy happy trical treat I said to them next I went down to another house that wasn't spooky as it was It only had spiders and black a black witch’s broom I knocked on the door and out came a black witch the lady gave us chocolate and chocolate candy pumpkins . When we stopped at kings road we saw my friend Zara and her Dad Babu they were going trical treating for yummy treats me and my Papa were walking to Zara we asked could we come with you to get yummy treats they said yes When we stopped down at the cafe we had a hot chocolate and a strawberry cupcake Than we went back down to costs cress to go to other houses for trick or treating When we saw another house that was even scarier I said happy trinkil treat and out came a spider the man gave us lollies and chocolate it was fun at halloween. than it was time to go home I said bye to my friend Zara and went home to eat all the goodies . My Edited Piece of Writing On Saturday I was at my Papa's, Aunt’s, and Uncle’s house getting ready for Halloween. When I saw my Papa he was dressed up in a spooky Zombie he looked so scary. I was dressed up as a purple bat. I was ready for Halloween. Me and my Papa were going around the houses asking for lollies. Once we went to a different house it was very black and very spooky. My Papa got scared so I told him don’t worry It's just a house full of decorations. There were spiderwebs, bats, and witch decorations. I knocked on the door and out came a ghost man. The man gave us sweets “trick or treat” I said to them. Next I went down the road to another house that wasn't as spooky as the last. It only had black spiders and a witch’s broom. I knocked on the door and out came a black witch. She gave us some Chocolates and Candies. When we stopped at Kings Road we saw my friend Zara and her Dad Babu. They were going trick or treating for treats. Me and my Papa were walking with Zara as we asked if we could come with them to get treats they said “yes”. We stopped at the cafe and we had a hot chocolate and a Strawberry Cupcakes. Then we went back down to Coates Crescent to go to the other houses for trick or treating. We saw another house that was scary. I said “trick or treat” and out came a spider. The man gave us some lollies and Chocolates . It was fun in halloween. “Finally time to go home” I said to myself. I said bye to my friend Zara and we both went home to eat all of our goodies. Yesterday and today I have been working with Taylor we had read over a sample of writing Taylor and me had to fix up the writing

My Chopsticks challenge recount

My Recount on chop stick challenge

Today  we were  doing  chopsticks challenge so we had to pick up the wine gums  with the chopsticks so Mrs Paton said start.  So  my group always be   last .   Nyjah pick the wine gums   from the bowl to get the wine gum to the next bowl .  shailah  is going to the next bowl and then she went to go to the other person . My groups name is Nyjah  Shailah and Juliet and Hajera . Joseph was  picking  the wine gums to the next bowl . Then Mrs Paton was measuring the ones that drop onto the table. So she tell’s as who    drop the wine gums  on the table  measuring it then they say the numbers and then writing it down. Then  we had to use  google drawing to make a post then we had to put it up on or blog  and then we had to do I challenge  half of the class  and then the  1st group win the challenge  . The End

     

this is my chop stick challenge recount

Chop stick challeng

the gragph shows the number of centimetren from where the starting bowl was the ta'ain

Pulley

this is one of the simple Machines and it pulley

Levers

This is my Levers post

Sharon recount

‘’Splash’’ into the water the water at in the pools was go on top of me . The water was warm and nice . I had to play so I went under the water I did a cannonball in the water and I was have fun in the pools because it was time to go class so I was having fun in the water it is cool and we went to the shop to eat food at home so my papa and nana and yvonne ante and it was dace time to go to my home .
  this is my recount

recount writing structure

Today I have been learning about a recount.A recount is is retelling a story that what your saying.

blog boot camp

 this  is the  my work  today