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Monday, 7 December 2015

Room 7's favourite flag

silver  The Original is 15 in room 7 pick 15 and the silver tem - red white and blue flag  had 8 and the higt was the origanal flag  win in room 7 because they

Friday, 4 December 2015

Xtra math

I got 3 wrong  and 31  Right I got 2 more and  I am past addition .

Thursday, 3 December 2015

xtramath

It got 27 right and 2 worng   igot 3 more and then i'm past addition

Revising Writing by Sharon Taylor

Instructions Read over this piece of writing. Change it so that it makes sense and so it sounds exciting. You can delete sentences and change words in the writing so that it can be enhanced. Try not to take the meaning away from the writing. On Saturday I was at my Papa's, and Aunts, and Uncles, house getting ready for halloween. When I saw my papa was dressed up in a spooky zombie I was dressed up as a purple bat. I was ready for halloween. Me and my Papa were going around the houses asking for lollies . Once I went to a house that was very black and very spooky my Papa got scared I told him don’t worry It's just a house full of dickarayshions . There Were spiderwebs and bats and witch dickarayshions I knocked on the door and out came a ghost a man and a lady gave us sweets yummy happy trical treat I said to them next I went down to another house that wasn't spooky as it was It only had spiders and black a black witch’s broom I knocked on the door and out came a black witch the lady gave us chocolate and chocolate candy pumpkins . When we stopped at kings road we saw my friend Zara and her Dad Babu they were going trical treating for yummy treats me and my Papa were walking to Zara we asked could we come with you to get yummy treats they said yes When we stopped down at the cafe we had a hot chocolate and a strawberry cupcake Than we went back down to costs cress to go to other houses for trick or treating When we saw another house that was even scarier I said happy trinkil treat and out came a spider the man gave us lollies and chocolate it was fun at halloween. than it was time to go home I said bye to my friend Zara and went home to eat all the goodies . My Edited Piece of Writing On Saturday I was at my Papa's, Aunt’s, and Uncle’s house getting ready for Halloween. When I saw my Papa he was dressed up in a spooky Zombie he looked so scary. I was dressed up as a purple bat. I was ready for Halloween. Me and my Papa were going around the houses asking for lollies. Once we went to a different house it was very black and very spooky. My Papa got scared so I told him don’t worry It's just a house full of decorations. There were spiderwebs, bats, and witch decorations. I knocked on the door and out came a ghost man. The man gave us sweets “trick or treat” I said to them. Next I went down the road to another house that wasn't as spooky as the last. It only had black spiders and a witch’s broom. I knocked on the door and out came a black witch. She gave us some Chocolates and Candies. When we stopped at Kings Road we saw my friend Zara and her Dad Babu. They were going trick or treating for treats. Me and my Papa were walking with Zara as we asked if we could come with them to get treats they said “yes”. We stopped at the cafe and we had a hot chocolate and a Strawberry Cupcakes. Then we went back down to Coates Crescent to go to the other houses for trick or treating. We saw another house that was scary. I said “trick or treat” and out came a spider. The man gave us some lollies and Chocolates . It was fun in halloween. “Finally time to go home” I said to myself. I said bye to my friend Zara and we both went home to eat all of our goodies. Yesterday and today I have been working with Taylor we had read over a sample of writing Taylor and me had to fix up the writing

Wednesday, 2 December 2015

xtramath

26 right and 2 wrong  and I got 4 then I am past addition.

Thursday, 26 November 2015

Xtramath

I got 37 right and 6 wrong and I need to work on  3+9 ,9+3 and 3+6 and 2+6 ,3+8 ,3+9

Wednesday, 25 November 2015

xtramath

I got 21 right and 5 wrong  next time I will get 6+2 and 9+ 3 , 4+ 8 4+2

Monday, 23 November 2015

sharon xtamath


this is my xtarmath and 33 right   and 4 wrong

Monday, 16 November 2015

xtramath

this is my xtramath and
i got 6 wrong and 17 right

Friday, 13 November 2015

My Chopsticks challenge recount

My Recount on chop stick challenge


Today  we were  doing  chopsticks challenge so we had to pick up the wine gums  with the chopsticks so Mrs Paton said start.  So  my group always be   last .   Nyjah pick the wine gums   from the bowl to get the wine gum to the next bowl .  shailah  is going to the next bowl and then she went to go to the other person . My groups name is Nyjah  Shailah and Juliet and Hajera . Joseph was  picking  the wine gums to the next bowl . Then Mrs Paton was measuring the ones that drop onto the table. So she tell’s as who    drop the wine gums  on the table  measuring it then they say the numbers and then writing it down. Then  we had to use  google drawing to make a post then we had to put it up on or blog  and then we had to do I challenge  half of the class  and then the  1st group win the challenge  . The End

     
this is my chop stick challenge recount

Thursday, 12 November 2015

my comet

this is the comint to room 4 there movie was so great and nice for kids to look at room 4 is so nice . Room 5 was so good because kids look at this they will go up on there reading this is so good room 5 . Room 9 had so funny things and it is so nice .

Tuesday, 10 November 2015

Chop stick challeng

the gragph shows the number of centimetren from where the starting bowl was the ta'ain

Monday, 9 November 2015

xtramath

I got 32 right and 2 wrong next time I need  to work  more

Friday, 6 November 2015

Xtramath

this is my xtramath I got 42 right and 3 wrong

Thursday, 5 November 2015

Wednesday, 4 November 2015

Friday, 30 October 2015

Xtramath

27 right  and 5 wrong  next time I will get all of it right .

Friday, 23 October 2015

xtramath

I got 15 right, 6 next time I will get it right

Wednesday, 21 October 2015

Monday, 19 October 2015

Sharon recount

‘’Splash’’ into the water the water at in the pools was go on top of me . The water was warm and nice . I had to play so I went under the water I did a cannonball in the water and I was have fun in the pools because it was time to go class so I was having fun in the water it is cool and we went to the shop to eat food at home so my papa and nana and yvonne ante and it was dace time to go to my home .
  this is my recount

Sharon Xtramath

18 at good and 9 at bad

Friday, 16 October 2015

Sharon xtrmath

4 bad and 22 at good

recount writing structure

Today I have been learning about a recount.A recount is is retelling a story that what your saying.

Wednesday, 14 October 2015

Tuesday, 13 October 2015

Sharon painting art work

Art Still Life Reflection


  1. What are you most
pleased with? Why / why not?
The apple because it’s big and I like the colour red.

2. What did you learn from creating your still life painting?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines


I learnt to blend the colours together for my background.  




3. What did you find easy ?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines
I found drawing my orange easy.


4. What did you find difficult?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines


I found blending the colours together difficult.


5. Who did helped you with your still life painting?
Miss Paton helped me with my painting.


6. What would you change? why / why not?
Think about sketching, shape, size, balance, painting-blending of colours, painting within the lines


My banana because  it was not  big like the apple.

7. What would you do to improve your still life painting next time?


I would draw my banana bigger.

Wednesday, 16 September 2015

Monday, 17 August 2015

Friday, 7 August 2015

Friday, 31 July 2015

Wednesday, 29 July 2015

Friday, 24 July 2015

blog Bootcamp

                                                      these are my comments for today .

Wednesday, 22 July 2015

Tuesday, 21 July 2015

Thursday, 2 July 2015

Wednesday, 1 July 2015

Tuesday, 30 June 2015

Friday, 26 June 2015

Squash

Making Anzac bicuits

Making Anzac biscuits by Sharon When we were making Anzac biscuits I was excited. The Anzac biscuits tasted like golden hot syrup in my mouth. Mele was cut 100 grams of butter, then it was Alex's turn to grease the trays. Shailah was measured the syrup.Joshua had to measured the flour. Tai and Nazanin melted the butter and the golden syrup in the hall kitchen. Then they came back to Room 7. Miss Paton slowly carried the pot to Room 7. Liam measured the sugar.Avalon was measured the rolled oats and poured the in the big red bowl. Najib was measured the coconut. Joshua measured the flour into the bowl. Miss Paton measured the the baking soda. Aung Naing and Sanujan.Marieta was mixing the ingredients . Then Aiden , Hajera ,sky and Jacob had to rolled the dough into little balls and Juliet and Nyjah , Aiden flattened the mixture with a fork. Liam and taylor was carrying the tray to the hall . Then Miss Paton was take the Anzac biscuits on the plate. Then I tasted the Anzac the And I like hot gold crumble . Making Anzac biscuits by Sharon When we were making Anzac biscuits I was excited. The Anzac biscuits tasted like golden hot syrup in my mouth. Mele was cut 100 grams of butter, then it was Alex's turn to grease the trays. Shailah was measured the syrup.Joshua had to measured the flour. Tai and Nazanin melted the butter and the golden syrup in the hall kitchen. Then they came back to Room 7. Miss Paton slowly carried the pot to Room 7. Liam measured the sugar.Avalon was measured the rolled oats and poured the in the big red bowl. Najib was measured the coconut. Joshua measured the flour into the bowl. Miss Paton measured the the baking soda. Aung Naing and Sanujan.Marieta was mixing the ingredients . Then Aiden , Hajera ,sky and Jacob had to rolled the dough into little balls and Juliet and Nyjah , Aiden flattened the mixture with a fork. Liam and taylor was carrying the tray to the hall . Then Miss Paton was take the Anzac biscuits on the plate. Then I tasted the Anzac the And I like hot gold crumble . Making Anzac biscuits by Sharon When we were making Anzac biscuits I was excited. The Anzac biscuits tasted like golden hot syrup in my mouth. Mele was cut 100 grams of butter, then it was Alex's turn to grease the trays. Shailah was measured the syrup.Joshua had to measured the flour. Tai and Nazanin melted the butter and the golden syrup in the hall kitchen. Then they came back to Room 7. Miss Paton slowly carried the pot to Room 7. Liam measured the sugar.Avalon was measured the rolled oats and poured the in the big red bowl. Najib was measured the coconut. Joshua measured the flour into the bowl. Miss Paton measured the the baking soda. Aung Naing and Sanujan.Marieta was mixing the ingredients . Then Aiden , Hajera ,sky and Jacob had to rolled the dough into little balls and Juliet and Nyjah , Aiden flattened the mixture with a fork. Liam and taylor was carrying the tray to the hall . Then Miss Paton was take the Anzac biscuits on the plate. Then I tasted the Anzac the And I like hot gold crumble .  this is about    making Anzac biscuits.

xtramath

2 at bad 3 at good